Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.
Our Autumn Tree is shaking in the wind. The leaves are falling gently to the ground. The leaves have changed colour and are red, yellow, orange, and brown. The dry brown leaves make crunching and crackling noise when we stand on them.
by Cosma
Hello Cosma, I enjoyed reading your descriptive writing about our autumn leaves on the trees at St. Patricks School.
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